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©2009 *Amena-chan
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SO THIS COVER IS ACTUALLY A COMIC PAGE hurhurhurhur
..Watercolors are friggin hard to use...:iconimhappyplz:
........this.......took......me......about.....an ...hour....to .....submit............I'm going nuts!!!!! D<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< seriously!!!!!! it's almost better WITHOUT internet than with this CRAP!!!!!!!!!!! D<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< man.......
anyway,back to topic~
THIS EVENT HERE HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH THE ACTUALL STORYINE OF THE DOUJINSHI~ call it an omake~ like a sidestory thing that presents what will sort of happen in this chapter as main event~ :'''DDDDD

well~...ok,this was drawn and colored completly by hand~ so it's traditional made... :''DDDD and like I said....man...fking hard to use water colors..and somehow I only realize this half way and then I can't stop anymore,I just have to go on with it no matter what......TORTUREEEEE I tell ya'! ...and besides being so fking hard to color,I had to RUIN MY INK PENS TRYING TO REPAIR THE OUTLINES AFTER GETING COVERED BY COLOR....AAAGH!! I have no more ink pens...and they were the best ever TT//////////o///////////////TT if my parents find out I'll never buy any others again!!! agggh! I promised to keep those for a longer time!~ D///////////////x aggh the agony......D//////x ...pff...but that isn't really the worse part....worse is I can't ink anything anymore =______= ......................................ok.........this is nasty...
I'll have to find a solution soon...it's either I wait to get some more money and by new ones.......either I post the upcoming pages un inked?~..hhmm....if I have no other choise I might get to that second idea too~

Aww,well,I think Dei looks quite cute with that cap on and with his hair like that~ :'//D

~anyway~possible faq:
*who's that woman? D///:
-you'll find out pretty soon.In about 3 pages or so~ :'D
*Why are they dressed up like this and what's with the docors?~
-It's an omake page,like a fictional event(all is actually,but this is a fictional event inside a fictional event understand? ^^; ) and it's supposed to resamble a 50's comic book scene where Sasori is a private detective ,Deidara a talkative news paper journalist boy-sidekick~ ( :XD: ) and the Lady is a potential cilent....but that seems to give Sasori an odd feeling "As if she didn't come for a case actually"~ ok~this is the explanation

*How do I read it?
-Since I taught it like an actuall comic book page,the pictures are arranged from left to right (last row)

*Is this made with plain water colors?
-yep,plainest water colors you can get~

*How long did it took you?
-hmm..if I were to work continously,almost a whole day~but I hadf to stop alot of times due to personal matters~

*Are you going to make more pages like this~?
-depends..but I hope I won't repeat this too soon..I need to mentally recover....=o='''

*When are the next pages of gambling out?
-in a day or two,depends on how my internet's mood is~ >_>''

Well,hope you'll like it and it won't cause too much confusion :XD:
~Please do enjoy and sorry it took so much..(Originally it lookes more vivid! D///< scanner kills! D////< )
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~Story and art: Amena-chan
~Characters: Masashi Kishimoto

Critiques


:iconumbreon12:
Well, firstly...

I'd say doing this page would have definitely taken skill and confidence to pull it off; not to mention that water colors are extremely hard to use.
Coming from you this is definitely an original piece of artwork that people just love to see from you, and the technique, lines, and shading are just absolutely perfect! Sure, ...a few chinks here and there but it's still great!
It looks like something straight out of a sleuth movie about a murder or a mystery involving a paper boy.
The impact I got from this was significantly high. I mean, the way Sasori is either annoyed or clearly jealous of something while Deidara looks cheerful and full of questions.
If I could give this a grade, it'd be an A+ for sure.
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lol Saso looks a little jellos (or how you may spell it) xD
look at those sneeky eyes xD

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white hair....uhhhh, hidan?

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holy fuck, seriously?

i love drawing fem!kakuzu, why? cause its fun~
:iconloliwashere:
lolz. its "jealous" what you spelled is the plural form or the jiggly, almost clear, "jello" treat ^_^

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lol XD that girls looks like sakura XD i can't wait to see the next pages ! :love: this pictures went very well ^^

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Does the woman have the hotts for Dei? Because Sasori looks possessive and hateful in the last little frame.

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AWESOME *O*

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si eu care credeam ca Deidei nu poate arata mai feminin de atat *p jos d ras* xD. OMFG credeam k e ma-sa k ai zis tu o data ca vine si ea in doujinshi. XD. Mrog arata ghine cu doi ochi si cum ai colorat ...O_O wow..water colors adik acuarela ^^'' ...*sucks at painting* :glomp:
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:iconbalumixbiffle:
GAAAAAH I MUST RAEP *steals Sasori* >>

Don't worry, I'll only keep him in the pantry for a few... days, weeks.. years... >>

You did amazing with the coloring and detail, really. I'd never be able to make something this epic ;A;

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:iconmusi56:
Watercolors ARE hard to use xD....I love this page,the colors are brilliant,Dei looks really cute^-^.

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That woman is freaky looking! She better stay away from Sasori and Deidara. They're soul mates. Or else I'll send the ghost of the foxy ferret to eat her. Lol. That's what I threaten my dogs with when they don't eat their dinner. ^-V

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